Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
28 April 2009 @ 8pm

Category:
Fragmentation

kept

down Hogarth’s winding vale
to past the dark, and further in

the crossroads upon us carried hackensack
roads borne of guilt
your hefty burden

to a silent place where qualms meet quench
and all words
tripped over lax of a floorboard
tripped off tonguelicks

somehow make sense

and your breath
your scream

kept

a hand, only apparent
from the corner to which
these thoughts must now lie.


4 Comments

Posted by
andophiroxia
4 May 2009 @ 2pm

Run, Rabbit, Run.


Posted by
Shawna
3 June 2009 @ 4am

I love the internal rhyme of quench, sense, breath, kept.


Posted by
Ben
5 July 2009 @ 8pm

Excellent. You can taste the scenes here.


Posted by
Kelly
15 November 2009 @ 12am

Beautiful stuff! Some excellent images and phrases. Thank you! I’ve just read a few of these poems, but I’ll be back for more soon . . .


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