Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
17 January 2008 @ 5pm

Category:
Incoherent Poetry

vantage?

hidden under mud slung scrapped from sky
the cloud could wander passing other passers by

dotted paper aeroplanes arc in the crispy smooth
the magic hour acts thriftily with darkening hue

a moonpainting from history, placating starshine bright
protecting veiled memory, drawing in the light

rainsplashed sparks marking the road ahead
twilight can exist; it’s a place outside the head

tiny drips of water fall from blocked guttertops
infrequently deluging in waterfalls and rocks

there is no resolution, or any proper end
a ream of flying thoughts to encircle minds again…


4 Comments

Posted by
Shell
18 January 2008 @ 9pm

darn, you just insist on melting me don’t you?

gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous ….


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
18 January 2008 @ 11pm

shell: it has not been icy so much here of late, just rain, rain, rain, breeze and cool air. do you have ice?


Posted by
Campfires & Battlefields
19 January 2008 @ 5pm

“Rainsplashed sparks.” Sounds like a great unwritten Cocteau Twins song. A vivid image.


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
20 January 2008 @ 2am

i think their words may be slightly more evocative…but thank you, :)


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