Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
25 December 2007 @ 12am

Category:
Incoherent Poetry, Photographical

one dark and foggy night…

one foggy night...

as the luminous glow of a smile once passed through your eyes
scanned closely and quietly back to home silence
a familiar reflection echoes from the past
a some one, a some body
a somebody you used to know
in a lifetime other than these cold hours
we spend our thoughtful years trying to see so clearly
that once vision sought, pass by
discarded and left on the wayside.

this year let’s not forget
shadows of cause and of regret
everything disappears in these mists…

all your thoughts and pixels and darks and lights
lead to a glorious wander down a faintly-trod path
with a vista to the end of the world
may well be mundane to you, but to me…
amazing.

to anyone and to everyone
casting a gaze these ways:

here in the dark is where we call home.
your thoughts are pure magic.
you are never alone.


7 Comments

Posted by
bohémienne
25 December 2007 @ 1am

“this year let’s not forget
shadows of cause and of regret”

Gorgeous. And rhyme-y.


Posted by
andophiroxia
25 December 2007 @ 1am

Love the tree. It sums it up quite nicely.


Posted by
Shell
25 December 2007 @ 1pm

beautiful images, especially loved the last 3 lines … thank you … *smiling in life magic*


Posted by
hrishi
25 December 2007 @ 10pm

it was all mundane
i felt all alone
your gaze - it brings magic
your gaze feels like home


Posted by
lillipilli
28 December 2007 @ 10am

great image, i can hear your roaring fire, and feel the home comfort.


Posted by
isabelle
30 December 2007 @ 12pm

beautifully haunting words, I really loved this.
( and hello and happy christmas and all that xx)


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
1 January 2008 @ 2am

thank you, everybody, for your lovely comments. happy new years and christmasses and everythings to you all.


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