Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
3 December 2007 @ 12am

Category:
Incoherent Poetry

hush

can’t speak today
in words
stolen from perspiring
beaded skin under
sallow glow, injecting
no
healthy tan, no worn parade
this cavalcade of biology
now simply throws through
a prose flow
indelibly scored on the backs of hands
fingers aloft
pointing to constellations
conurbations of sky where
soon the waning fires
may rekindle from flinted spark.

keep your wick burning for me
keep you, just how you’ll be.

shhh…


5 Comments

Posted by
andophiroxia
3 December 2007 @ 2am

Beautiful.


Posted by
bohémienne
3 December 2007 @ 2am

Beautifully incoherent. I love the word ‘conurbations’… must go look it up so that I can use it some time. You are the wordmeister.


Posted by
An Unreliable Witness
3 December 2007 @ 8am

Words can be overrated, prose flows too, when the absence of them produces poetry this memorable.


Posted by
Shell
3 December 2007 @ 9am

gorgeously .. well … erotic.. yes, really …*deep sigh*


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
9 December 2007 @ 10pm

Andophiroxia: thank you.

Bohémienne: thank you too. although conurbations is more geographical than anything else. sort of central business district-alike. hmm.

Mr. Witness: All things go, even memories. (thank you as well)

Shell: um….thank you!


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