Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
24 August 2007 @ 1am

Category:
Incoherent Poetry, Tiny Thoughts

furyless

once you rinsed puzzle from teased hair
to detect the remains of the faintest scent;
a misty city, stripteasing concrete.
dealing only in terms of tiny particles from
each whirr of the mind
your every breath laced with fantastical fibre
sucked from lung and pillowed expanse
longing to pepperdust landscape
in fume and fury,
blanketted.

inhale your own scent from these wisps
of smattered raindrops tearing on glass
but know that weather may never
hear the quake in your fingerprint
as they will.


4 Comments

Posted by
people
25 August 2007 @ 3am

have you READ perfume?
READ perfume


Posted by
lillipilli
26 August 2007 @ 11pm

You are a find.


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
26 August 2007 @ 11pm

People - Not yet. But maybe.

Lillipilli - Eep. I hope, um, well. yes.


Posted by
rax
29 August 2007 @ 8am

this poem is amazing. thanks for stopping by my afterglow blog. i linked you to my other site as well


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