Absolutely Miles Away …too many clouds, too little time…

Posted
22 April 2007 @ 12am

Category:
Ventriloquism, Wordiness

See Through

Glazed, perspex eyes looking wistfully through blue tinged plastic, deem life to be the search for awakeness, the constant pursuit for the perfect cup of coffee, a hideaway to provide solace, and the pursuit of The Great Understanding. Verse starts to take shape around the thin pencil lines gracefully traced with purpose through the paper; the author’s semi-legible scrawlings carefully inked in. The language dance begins.

Pollen makes the air suspend gelatinously, adding to the hazy drifting of the head, unsure which dimension has been entered, or the co-ordinates of the next loll. Eyelids sealing the self under seeming hundredweights, thoughts in the sky, the soup between slowly boiling and blending. Permeating.

Waiting. Writing. Waking. A rabble of cupboards and utensils crashing, providing the metallic tinnitus. Added to the fresh smell of setting ink and the perpetual itching of a nib eager to fulfil its potential, scratching away at all irritations. Yet sort of abstractly falling away at the curved edge. One step from being ripped away and replaced.

The words sympathise. They are willing to take everything, along with all those bags of crazy, the endless list of broken imperfections, the idiotic behaviour. They tried to mend with pills and stitches and metal. This adds to the further fragmentation, with chips, cracks, chunks, peppering the earth.

But they seem to understand.


7 Comments

Posted by
andophiroxia
22 April 2007 @ 5am

Pollen does a lot of things, although I would think that’s an adequate description of what it does to my respiratory system.


Posted by
An Unreliable Witness
22 April 2007 @ 6pm

Words (usually) do understand, I find, when nothing and no one elsse seems to. But then, I have been known to be wrong.


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
22 April 2007 @ 6pm

andophiroxia: pollen can be such a bother!

Mr Witness sir : it seems quite difficult to find understanding. However, some things and some people do seem to understand, both being of huge value. You’re not wrong there.


Posted by
An Unreliable Witness
23 April 2007 @ 10pm

Oh, what a lovely and highly evocative new name for your domain. Almost does what it says on the tin …


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
23 April 2007 @ 10pm

hang on a second….er….this isn’t actually meant to be here yet! how did you find me? :)

this site is *extremely* temperamental in content at the moment, but will hopefully be up and running more smoothly soon.

Thankyou for the “woo” about the name - how did you choose yours?


Posted by
Clare
26 April 2007 @ 3pm

Pollen makes me happy.


Posted by
Absolutely Miles Away
26 April 2007 @ 6pm

hello Clare!

the polleny scent in the air and the way it dusts trees and plants is lovely, i wish it agreed with me more!


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